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Trails To Success

The trails to success is finally here I found the trail that was hard to appear Walking alone at eve, watching the day go by Talking about my problems to God, and he told me to draw nigh walking slowly through the garden he pulled me closer to the sky- Amen

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Date: 5/22/2009 9:34:00 AM
This is excellent! The path to enlightenment is always there. One must find and walk it with kindness of heart and quality of mind. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 5/11/2009 7:56:00 AM
A words to be with... when you're walking alone..Mr. Jim a beautiful piece!
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Date: 5/8/2009 9:44:00 AM
Eric, God lives and loves your words of praise. This poem is heartfelt and upflifting. Very nice. I'm overjoyed to see that happier days are ahead. Love, Dane
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Date: 5/8/2009 6:56:00 AM
Prayer is th eonly way to go up brother, Icarus went up with feathers and came down melted with hubris ... only Yahweh are we safe ... and our talents bring us praises singing him. Keep the faith, bravo for the write.
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