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Trails of Sunlight

The wonder of the dawning sun Is majestic to behold Ribbons surrounding trees and cliffs In tones of flame and gold Here, dazzling beams illuminate A passage through the sea Coloring the radiant crest In warm serenity A gentle time to plead for hope As quickly fades its light Where etched silhouettes blend and merge Enkindling rise of night. Brian Strand, 475 Aug 5, 2018

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Date: 8/10/2018 12:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Well done.
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Date: 8/9/2018 9:10:00 PM
Best wishes and congrats for your win in Brian's contest, Banjo - great stuff! Keep up the wonderful work, my friend! :-)
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Date: 8/8/2018 1:02:00 PM
just looked at the list recently... how soulful no wonder it won no.1 placement, banjo!...best congrats and glad that you visit my page..huggs
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Date: 8/7/2018 9:34:00 PM
beautiful penmanship - well won
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Date: 8/7/2018 12:33:00 PM
A poet's poem Banjo...with imagery that enchants the soul. I loved this! Congratulations on your first placement. This is going into my Faves! : )
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Date: 8/6/2018 2:59:00 PM
A lovely poem. Congrats on your gold medal win, Banjo.
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