Banjo Casto Poet Rhyme

Trails of Sunlight

The wonder of the dawning sun
Is majestic to behold
Ribbons surrounding trees and cliffs
In tones of flame and gold

Here, dazzling beams illuminate
A passage  through  the sea
Coloring the radiant crest
In warm serenity

A gentle  time  to plead for hope
As quickly fades  its light
Where etched silhouettes blend and merge
Enkindling rise of night. 


Brian Strand, 475
Aug 5, 2018

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Susan Gentry August 10, 2018 at 12:55 PM Congratulations on your win! Well done.

Gregory Richard Barden August 9, 2018 at 9:10 PM Best wishes and congrats for your win in Brian's contest, Banjo - great stuff! Keep up the wonderful work, my friend! :-)

Nette Onclaud August 8, 2018 at 1:02 PM just looked at the list recently... how soulful no wonder it won no.1 placement, banjo!...best congrats and glad that you visit my page..huggs

Virginia Waters August 7, 2018 at 9:34 PM beautiful penmanship - well won

Connie Marcum Wong August 7, 2018 at 12:33 PM A poet's poem Banjo...with imagery that enchants the soul. I loved this! Congratulations on your first placement. This is going into my Faves! : )

Line Gauthier August 6, 2018 at 2:59 PM A lovely poem. Congrats on your gold medal win, Banjo.