Bl Devnath Poet Lyric

Traffic Jam

Traffic jam in the ways of life
crowded noisy groan hazardous
Oh ! mind breathing suffers from suffocation

Busy all are hurry no time
reach the destination by hook or by crook
to get the works done run and run
 
To avail few minutes for few days
to keep happy all the ways
try again and again fun and fun

What is got that's the gain
from giving and taking game
if not not mine no worry and no pain.

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Lynn Marie April 7, 2017 at 3:49 PM Oh how true you pen the perils of traffic BL :-) I think this a first lyric I 've read from you, it's nice to see different forms ... I can only imagine your music choice :-) Wonderful writing. blessings xxx

Elizabeth Wesley July 6, 2011 at 8:51 AM A great verse on the horrors of traffic. I am in it all the time. Bl Devnath July 6, 2011 at 11:14 PM Not only you, I am too. Thanks for Your sweet comment. bl Bl Devnath July 6, 2011 at 11:06 PM Not only you, I am too. Thanks for our sweet comment. bl

Carol Sunshine Brown July 5, 2011 at 10:11 AM What a way to start my week, reading the words that are flowing from your soul. May you find the inspiration each day to continue writing and sharing your wonderful poetry with us BL. Love, Carol Bl Devnath July 5, 2011 at 11:46 PM Many many thanks for your inspiration and I am trying to extract the real feeling from my heart and Soul.