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Traffic Jam

Traffic jam in the ways of life crowded noisy groan hazardous Oh ! mind breathing suffers from suffocation Busy all are hurry no time reach the destination by hook or by crook to get the works done run and run To avail few minutes for few days to keep happy all the ways try again and again fun and fun What is got that's the gain from giving and taking game if not not mine no worry and no pain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/7/2017 3:49:00 PM
Oh how true you pen the perils of traffic BL :-) I think this a first lyric I 've read from you, it's nice to see different forms ... I can only imagine your music choice :-) Wonderful writing. blessings xxx
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Date: 7/6/2011 8:51:00 AM
A great verse on the horrors of traffic. I am in it all the time.
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Bl Devnath
Date: 7/6/2011 11:14:00 PM
Not only you, I am too. Thanks for Your sweet comment. bl
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Bl Devnath
Date: 7/6/2011 11:06:00 PM
Not only you, I am too. Thanks for our sweet comment. bl
Date: 7/5/2011 10:11:00 AM
What a way to start my week, reading the words that are flowing from your soul. May you find the inspiration each day to continue writing and sharing your wonderful poetry with us BL. Love, Carol
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Bl Devnath
Date: 7/5/2011 11:46:00 PM
Many many thanks for your inspiration and I am trying to extract the real feeling from my heart and Soul.

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