Cheryl Hoffman Poet Rhyme

Trading Shoes

Smugness had finally reached its fruition
as unfairly she would jump to conclusions
folks down on their luck would leave her amused
saying this is the unfortunate path that they choose
till one day she got to walk a mile in their shoes


6-13-18

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Susan Gentry June 21, 2018 at 5:28 PM Awww Congratulations on your win with this wise poem. Well done! Cheryl Hoffman June 21, 2018 at 7:38 PM Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Susan; I really appreciate it!~Che :)

Andrea Dietrich June 19, 2018 at 3:32 PM ahhh, Karma comes to bite her in the behind then. Love that. Congrats on your win. Cheryl Hoffman June 21, 2018 at 7:38 PM Never thought of it that way lol! Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Andrea; I really appreciate it!~Che :)

Anne-Lise Andresen June 17, 2018 at 12:27 PM - I visit your poem Cheryl, with congratulations and a hugs // Anne-Lise :) Cheryl Hoffman June 17, 2018 at 7:50 PM Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Anne-Lise; I really appreciate it! Hugs to you too~Che :)

Tom Cunningham June 17, 2018 at 11:35 AM Congratulations Cheryl. Tom. Cheryl Hoffman June 17, 2018 at 7:49 PM Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Tom; I really appreciate it!~Che :)

Silent One June 17, 2018 at 6:56 AM Yes! People judge but do not know what it is like to walk in other's shoes.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Cheryl Hoffman June 17, 2018 at 8:09 AM Thank you so much for placing me as one of the second place winners and for the very kind congrats Silent One; I really appreciate it!~Che :)