trade

I know you wish for a place to be, 
hidden in the mist, silent as the sea. 
No fear, no hope, no questions asked. 
where the nights are not heavy  
and darkness don't last. 
could you trade this place 
For your favourite song? 
the throbbing of your heart 
as you run towards the dawn. 
The echo of your name cut through the trees 
you run out of breath  
But your legs still keep, 
Running. 
You keep running- 
and then you run into the night. 
past your mother's flowers  
the wet clothes in a line. 
They brush against your face, 
the water slips- 
it leaves a cold stain, 
enough to melt your lips. 
the concrete floor pulls you back 
"stop running", it says 
take it all in, take all that you have. 
I know it overflows, overstays, overloads 
but without it, aren't we nothing? 
and nothing is what's left.
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Agustin Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 12:19 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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