Traces To Follow

As the sun comes down
showing its face, 
we go our way
leaving our trace.
Its light makes it visible
for us to see, 
that we are not alone
in our journey.
The steps we are following
have been left by someone
for us to be guided
and reach our own home.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 30, 2010 at 10:09 AM
What an outstanding way to enjoy a day. I am so happy to be able to read the excellent poetry here at PoetrySoup today. Hope you are enjoying your day and finding much inspiration along the way Aida. Love, Carol
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