Traces of the Moon

Dancing silhouettes,
Shadows frolic on the ground;
Moonbeams through the trees.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Crane Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 4:18 PM
sweet .. you got some great imagery ..i really enjoy reading your work :).. for real . Marco
Shango Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 8:03 AM
Bring the canvas out for public exhibition ... fans are cheering
Neal Avatar
May 18, 2009 at 11:31 PM
loved the first line, I can see them dancing on a calm evening.
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May 15, 2009 at 9:40 AM
Nice use of imagery for a creative view. I enjoyed this one. Thank you for sharing it. Have a wonderful day! Karen
Strand Avatar
May 15, 2009 at 8:34 AM
Very picturesque work Raul.Rgds Brian
Richards Avatar
May 15, 2009 at 7:18 AM
Another delight from Raul !!! Love this!! :)
Winter Avatar
May 15, 2009 at 5:56 AM
Enchanting in imagery. Awesome writing. Love, Shar
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May 15, 2009 at 12:59 AM
I love the moon and the magic and mystery of it. In each line you have managed to create the image of enchantment. The idea of silhouettes gives so many options as to what the reader can imagine. Whether it be the shadows of the limbs of trees or it be that two lovers dance within the cover of those trees, the silhouettes are magical in this write. Well done. Smiles from Lolita
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