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Traces of the Moon

Dancing silhouettes, Shadows frolic on the ground; Moonbeams through the trees.

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Marcus Crane

Date: 9/22/2009 4:18:00 PM

sweet .. you got some great imagery ..i really enjoy reading your work :).. for real . Marco

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/21/2009 8:03:00 AM

Bring the canvas out for public exhibition ... fans are cheering

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 5/18/2009 11:31:00 PM

loved the first line, I can see them dancing on a calm evening.

Date: 5/15/2009 9:40:00 AM

Nice use of imagery for a creative view. I enjoyed this one. Thank you for sharing it. Have a wonderful day! Karen

Brian Strand

Date: 5/15/2009 8:34:00 AM

Very picturesque work Raul.Rgds Brian

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/15/2009 7:18:00 AM

Another delight from Raul !!! Love this!! :)

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/15/2009 5:56:00 AM

Enchanting in imagery. Awesome writing. Love, Shar

Lena Townsend

Date: 5/15/2009 12:59:00 AM

I love the moon and the magic and mystery of it. In each line you have managed to create the image of enchantment. The idea of silhouettes gives so many options as to what the reader can imagine. Whether it be the shadows of the limbs of trees or it be that two lovers dance within the cover of those trees, the silhouettes are magical in this write. Well done. Smiles from Lolita