Toys

through snow parents dash
fist full of much needed cash….
with hammers toys smash
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
December 3, 2010 at 9:21 PM
Yes, those toys always end up in the dumpster anyway. What a rat race for nothing!
Onclaud Avatar
December 3, 2010 at 9:11 AM
i like the giddy feel of this piece, robb! very interesting and arrestingly realistic.. warmest, nette
Fillmore Avatar
December 3, 2010 at 8:24 AM
love this:) really good write!
Mehta Avatar
December 3, 2010 at 8:16 AM
Wonderful and meaningful images you have penned, Robb
Sweetheart Avatar
December 3, 2010 at 8:16 AM
By the end of shopping day for toys all parents must feel this way Robb.. a great one my friend.. Soup Mail..
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