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Written on May 1st, 2025 for Oliver Mckeithan's Acrostic Agility Poetry Contest
Tarnished, cracked, and parched without your love. Oh, why hast thou forsaken my devotion? Your impulsivity led to my demise, accumulating dust among disused collections.

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Date: 5/4/2025 10:51:00 PM
unique write. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Sara Jama
Date: 5/8/2025 4:48:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 5/4/2025 10:23:00 AM
- Congratulations on your Acrostic poem " Toy" in the contest, Sara :) - hugs
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Sara Jama
Date: 5/8/2025 4:47:00 AM
Thank you very much.

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