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TOY

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Created for Acrostic Agility Poetry Contest offered by Oliver Mckeithan.

Touching my face. Ordering champagne. You slide off your vow from your finger.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2025 5:34:00 PM

Oh. That is so clever. Love it. Hope you scored high

thriveni c mysore

Date: 5/4/2025 10:44:00 PM

so different, lovely. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

Beau Barberis
Date: 5/5/2025 8:47:00 AM

Thank you! Sometimes the prompt turns out differently than I first thought!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/4/2025 10:28:00 AM

- Congratulations on your Acrostic poem " Toy" in the contest, Beau :) - hugs

Beau Barberis
Date: 5/5/2025 8:46:00 AM

Thank you for taking the time to comment! So nice!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/2/2025 5:22:00 AM

Interesting…evokative

Beau Barberis
Date: 5/5/2025 8:45:00 AM

I tried to write about a toy but I kept coming back to toying with emotions so went with it!