Tower of Babel

Tower of babel
falls pride crushed dust
scattered across the face
Of earth dull heads crumble
Who challenges Gods of the ice-bergs 
Spilling thorns on sad milky way
Are we building tower ?
Let it crumble on  heart.



TAROT CARDS - Poetry Contest
Sponsor	nette onclaud
Octodil  4-4-6-6-8- 8-6-6 syllables
No. 6 The Tower
Poet: Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
29 January,2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 27, 2015 at 11:12 PM
Rajat, Congratulations **SKAT LOVE**
Haight Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 4:59 PM
Congratulations on your win, Rajat! Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 4:41 PM
Many congrats on your win Rajat:-) hugs Jan xx
Callus Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 4:29 PM
Very intelligent musing, Rajat! We have to be careful of the towers that we build...for us, for others, or around us. Pride can easily ravish love and happiness. Congrats on a lovely win! #7 // paul
Dietrich Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 2:14 PM
hey, big congrats on your win, Rajat. Way to go!
Onclaud Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 1:52 PM
fearless write and overpowering, rajat.. thanks for joining my contest and huge congrats!
Roper Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 1:23 PM
Congratulations on your win. My dear friend
Mcdaid Avatar
January 30, 2015 at 2:07 AM
powerful pen rajat i tip my hat smiling
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 30, 2015 at 11:45 AM
Thank you for your inspiring comment liam my dear friend>love>rajat
Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 2:08 PM
very interesting one and some cool images in it!
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 30, 2015 at 11:43 AM
andrea love>rajat
Meade Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 1:39 PM
Outstanding my dear friend -- many of towers I have built -- fortunately, they have crumbled and dust I wear on my forehead! Much love dear friend. 7
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 30, 2015 at 11:48 AM
hahah David we have the habit of building towers to be crushed on somebody's head.Let's see what happens if they crush on somebody's heart.Love David. God bless you.Your friend
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