Towards the Light

Peaks and (valleys) of an AA
Poem may be read Whole or Peaks only and (valleys) only

As my fingers trace your silhouette mind
(Yesterday showers fell upon a gentle face)
And the strength returns straight from your love’s heart
(Today they enter the world of a different pace,)
Those your shoulders that held me safe I find
(When one you take on a roller coaster ride)
No more to dwell in life’s shadowy part
(On to heaven then deep in despair nowhere to hide.)
Everyday a stepping stone across strife
(As darkness descends upon each avenue)
Each tender touch and words spoken ring out
(Eyes adjust as guiding lamps of one’s sinew,)
Eyes that see the same yet different life
(Before the mind searches vigorously for reasons)
Your love grows in me in you there’s no doubt
(And veils of your face I see like the changing seasons.)

To take the wrong road the right path a choice
(Some days one of down hearted total dejection)
Alone there was only one direction
(Some days an offer of heavens welcoming crutch)
When in dispute one opinion one voice
(Some days with in the abyss I fall into reflection)
You did instigate life’s resurrection
(Some days from out of the darkness your hand I touch.)

In pursuit of those the headiest days
Found an alternative with wondrous ways.

 © Harry J Horsman 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A   Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 6:42 PM
Hello Harry,, Congratulations on your fine win. LINDA
Roper Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 1:07 PM
Congratulations on your win a 7. Blessings dear friend Eve
Dietrich Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 10:34 PM
Dear Harry Thanks so much for your helping me with this contest. it's no wonder you scored so high. your talent also helped me to make the winners' list as well when you chose the poems i should use for this contest. you are so insightful. Congrats to you with your amazing poem's win.
May Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 9:20 PM
Congrats on a fine win Harry
Richards Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 8:10 PM
Perfectly blended .....It flows together as a river of tears !! Well done, Harry !!
Allison Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 4:44 PM
You combined these two poems so so well - Craig really did set us quite a challenge - many congrats Harry:-) Hugs jan xx
Lindley Avatar
March 31, 2015 at 8:00 AM
Brilliant combination of two great poems. A7 and a pleasure to read this fine morn.
Dietrich Avatar
March 4, 2015 at 2:06 PM
Stopping by to say hi!! Is it spring yet in England?
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2015 at 11:28 PM
You are genius, Harry. Wish I could just find someone to do this one for me. I have no clue which poems of my own to intermingle this way. It will strain my brain to even try to figure it out. I hope this scores high. You were superb!
Callus Avatar
February 26, 2015 at 8:22 AM
Intermingling these two poems together was no easy job; must also have been time consuming, Harry! I'm truly impressed. In my eyes it is already a winner. #7 // paul
Vaso Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 9:49 PM
Hi Harry, came back for a second read! :)
Deschler Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 8:08 PM
Life is made so much easier when we can find someone to lean on... I think you've done a marvelous job with this contest. I wanted to give it a try, but it was too intimidating for me. I wish you the best of luck, Harry!
Smith Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 5:17 PM
Didn't dare attempt it.. You have made it seem a breeze!!.. 7 my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
Sathasivam Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 6:40 AM
Excellent. Beautifully said, Enjoyed. Tfs
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
February 24, 2015 at 8:22 PM
wowowwow! that is so much of poetry.. :) I love every line.. :)!!! a fave for me!//olive eloisa
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 24, 2015 at 10:51 AM
These two powerful and emotive poems blend together perfectly, Harry...well done!! Hugs, Rhonda
Roper Avatar
February 24, 2015 at 10:25 AM
Well done, good luck in the contest. a 7 blessings
Lamoureux Avatar
February 24, 2015 at 7:19 AM
After reading your piece Harry I was inspired to give the contest a go.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 23, 2015 at 12:03 PM
You did this so well Harry!
Peranteau Avatar
February 23, 2015 at 8:11 AM
Gooood morning dear poet ! Well sir....when I first read this write, MINE HEAD was twisting ;)....so I then read your Sonnet and then your ryhme (dang, I should have left comments while I was there)...any who, now this write completely flows with me ! And for all three writes...when this soul calls you poet (cause I read the writes first)...you are the poet ;) Three clever writes Mr. Horsman ! Have a wonderful week.........much love, james
Mcdaid Avatar
February 23, 2015 at 7:33 AM
very beautifully painted harry deep filled with emotions excellent pen dear friend
Vaso Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 9:21 PM
I liked this one Harry, whats nice, is you have to think twice, and ponder things, great poem!
Onclaud Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 11:17 AM
well strings of poetry well blended to capture the essence of being-ness, harry.. great job!.. huggs
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 7:04 AM
as BL states genius luv , love it xx
Sirak Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 6:44 AM
Wow! This one should be at the top of the winners list. Powerful feelings in every line.
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