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"Tour of Duty" go forth and conquer go forth and multiply we are taught like good little madams, it’s fed to us right (not left) from the get go down our throats, it’s ingrained in the majority of us, then, rank and file, off we go, deligently we march towards that evocative thing promised, Love calls us keenly, Love calls us softly, Love like communion, green gardens wild daisies crowns worn like halos, loves me, loves me not, loves me not, loves me, planted and naively bedded, we dance that dance, into the seductive arms of faith and chance, a wanton war romancing our womanhood, we roll over like puppies our upturned faces and stomachs stroked, being fed red apples like simpletons in a moist ripe bed of roses, sprinkled with the holy water of keeping the win for keepsakes framed and parked on a wall like stag horns, momentos of a past well worn, our competitive strip poker smiling faces the blue ribbons adorned and mounted like miss congeniality, good girls wagging tails, then feeding children spoonfuls of honey, to do it all over again obedience only lasts so long so long tours of duties so long good girls take notes (LadyLabyrinth / 2023)

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Date: 8/22/2023 12:41:00 PM
I really like this poem. Great flow and imagery.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/22/2023 3:02:00 PM
notch it up to rank and file; being a female. From my perspective, perhaps not of others.
Date: 8/9/2023 5:53:00 PM
(smiles)
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Date: 8/9/2023 5:57:00 PM
;)...it needs a little tweeking ... do not remove the double vowel to replace with a consonant. Probably needs correcting. Miss Spelled.
Date: 8/9/2023 5:45:00 PM
"When The Pawn....", Fiona Apple (Full Album)
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Date: 8/9/2023 6:30:00 PM
LYRICS, "On the Bound", Fiona Apple (1st in set, Full Album, "When the Pawn..") https://genius.com/Fiona-apple-on-the-bound-lyrics
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Date: 8/9/2023 5:45:00 PM
https://youtu.be/fmCu07ovtxM

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