Touching

Your hair touching my face is like a cool breeze on a spring day
your hands touching my skin are like cool waves lapping over the still beach
your lips touching mine are like all the flavors of life in a moment delivered with the 
softness of a light rain 
your eyes touching me walking over me feels like the rays of the sun on a beautiful 
sunny day warm, relaxing
when our bodies touch its like fire meeting air after being without for so long
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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April 26, 2011 at 2:13 PM
Sebastin, I most enjoyed the final line-like fire meeting air after being without for so long...are u a chemistry major? ha ha. Much enjoyed...passionate. Gwendolen
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