Touched By the Sun

I thought I lost it all,

My life was out of control,

until you come around,

and changed it all,

my heart was so cold,

I never used to smile,

until u come along,

 And showed me how,

I have been touched by the sun,

Am caught by its light,

happiness is creeping to my life,

I have crawled out of pain,

U bought new meaning to my life,

am now giggling with vicarious pleasure,

U have given form and shape to ma weak dying bones,

Am overwhelm by the sunlight,

My heart is on the wheels,

A feeling I cant fight against,

I was bleeding on the inside,

Until the day u directed your light to my heart,

You took away the pain,

Now fresh blood is flowing in my veins,

I have been touched by the sun,

Am caught by its light,

Happiness is creeping into my face

I have crawled out of pain,

With your hot burning flame,

U broke the ice on my heart,

I was so remote,

Now am touchable,

Whenever the world brings me down,

I know u will help me up,

u wont let me drown,

In every battlefield,

U will spread your wings,

I have been touched by the sun,

Am caught by its light,

happiness is creeping into my face,

I have crawled out of pain,

Whenever i Fall,

I wont have to fill the puzzles,

I know I will make it through it all,

For u will watch over your sacred vessel,

I have been touched by the sun,

Am caught by its light,

happiness is creeping to my life,

I have crawled out of pain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/19/2011 7:38:00 AM
Beautiful & heartwarming. Write On!
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Elizabeth Lepapa
Date: 6/21/2011 5:25:00 AM
thank you dear bethlehem(like your name) for the encouragements.Hope you enjoy the next poems.take care
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Elizabeth Lepapa
Date: 6/21/2011 5:25:00 AM
thank you dear bethlehem(like your name) for the encouragements.Hope you enjoy the next poems.take care
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Elizabeth Lepapa
Date: 6/21/2011 5:25:00 AM
thank you dear bethlehem(like your name) for the encouragements.Hope you enjoy the next poems.take care
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Elizabeth Lepapa
Date: 6/21/2011 5:25:00 AM
thank you dear bethlehem(like your name) for the encouragements.Hope you enjoy the next poems.take care
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Elizabeth Lepapa
Date: 6/21/2011 5:25:00 AM
thank you dear bethlehem(like your name) for the encouragements.Hope you enjoy the next poems.take care
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Elizabeth Lepapa
Date: 6/21/2011 5:25:00 AM
thank you dear bethlehem(like your name) for the encouragements.Hope you enjoy the next poems.take care
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Elizabeth Lepapa
Date: 6/21/2011 5:25:00 AM
thank you dear bethlehem(like your name) for the encouragements.Hope you enjoy the next poems.take care
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Elizabeth Lepapa
Date: 6/21/2011 5:24:00 AM
thank you dear bethlehem(like your name) for the encouragements.Hope you enjoy the next poems.take care
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Elizabeth Lepapa
Date: 6/21/2011 5:24:00 AM
thank you dear bethlehem(like your name) for the encouragements.Hope you enjoy the next poems.take care
Date: 6/19/2011 5:02:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Elizabeth. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Elizabeth Lepapa
Date: 6/21/2011 5:27:00 AM
First I would love to thank you from my innermost part for appreciating my work and for taking time to comment.I hope I will gain my knowledge and wisdom.Lots of love liz.
Date: 6/18/2011 7:07:00 PM
Nice positive expressions, elizabeth
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Elizabeth Lepapa
Date: 6/21/2011 5:28:00 AM
Thanks for taking your time to check my work.Hope you enjoy the others.
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