Touche

I hate when someone says I snore
And then I hate it even more
When it is said with mirth and glee
To poke a little fun at me.

We can’t control our sleeping sounds
So ridicule is out of bounds
And that is why I should not tell
My husband that he snores as well!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Johnson Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 5:40 AM
You snore? I don't believe it. :)
Callus Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 1:26 AM
Very witty and true, Ilene! Enjoyable write. // paul
Smith Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 7:39 PM
Ha! Ha! Love It, Ilene, dear friend! With my husband and I it is a race to see which one gets to sleep first. The other must bear the snoring! Lol.. Hugs.. Arlene
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