Touch of Blood

WHEN you are old and gray and full of sleep
Worry not, for with gladness I will be by your side
‘Til my sight is drowned in the cataract of tears

I will read, for you, the verses your lips once had 

Sounding on the flowers of time 
For the little gods, to enjoy, as they tread 
The path of their adolescence

Everyday, I will shake 
The pillows of your twilight nights 
To collect

Your remnants. I will paint them 
With lush of my thoughts, using the fingers 
Of your favorite Northern star 

That you may feel the warm

Touch of your 
Own blood
WHEN you are old and gray and full of sleep


--

“Inspired by the masters” a poetry contest 
sponsored by: Tracy Decker

first line: WHEN you are old and gray and full of sleep
from William Butler Yeats’ poem “When You are Old”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 11/17/2008 2:58:00 AM
Great write, Ernesto. Congratulations on your well deserved win in Tracey's awesome contest. Nigel
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Date: 11/15/2008 6:13:00 PM
Warmest congrats Ernesto on your win in Tracy's contest! Way to go! Love, Shar
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Date: 10/17/2008 2:00:00 AM
Otsenre, I love thisone. It's full of concern, love and repect. Great nad inspiring one. Regards to her. Ernie
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Date: 10/16/2008 11:10:00 AM
Great write and inspiring. God bless you Michael
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