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Inspired this morning by Vijay's comment to Becca on her lovely blog. She would like to hear from all of us. Please check it out.

 

I still miss the touch of a lover.
Those tips reading me like braille.
Caressing and investigating.
Always arousing without fail.

I still miss the touch of a lover.
It is so cold now in my bed.
I liked to sleep cupped together.
After our clothes were shed.

I still miss the touch of a lover.
One familiar with my desires.
Knowing all the secret places
to set me right on fire.

I still miss the touch of a lover.
It seems he misses me too.
I am so tempted to return.
My body yearns for you.


Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/6/2017 2:34:00 PM
- An honest and loving wish, Jean - (But, there are soft and warm wool carpets ... they are faithful forever :))) - A lovely poem, Jean - hugs // Anne-Lise:)
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 11/6/2017 2:50:00 PM
SUNSHINE!! You always bring me a big smile whenever I see you. I will most likely be making do with the woolly carpet when push comes to shove.
Date: 11/6/2017 11:24:00 AM
Good use of anaphora. Framing each verse with the musing is a nice touch. Thanks for sharing.............peace!
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Date: 11/6/2017 11:30:00 AM
Hi Richard. So that's what anaphora means? Good to know.
Date: 11/5/2017 5:30:00 PM
I am sure many can relate and miss the physical contact but not the other issues that cause a relationship to fail .Sending you a big hug:-) Jan xx
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Date: 11/5/2017 5:45:00 PM
Hi Jan. I'm sorry I'm not on here so much these days. My muse went AWOL. She's an imp that one. Hope all is well with you and all your care.
Date: 11/2/2017 9:04:00 PM
This is a wonderful write, Jean... Hugs Eve~`*
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 11/3/2017 11:22:00 AM
Thank you Eve. My pen is being a bit mean with ink these days. I am hopeful it will flow again soon.
Date: 10/31/2017 9:02:00 PM
I am blind, if only I could find you!!! This was so well expressed Jeannie
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Date: 11/1/2017 3:42:00 AM
I love it when you call me Jeannie!
Date: 10/28/2017 2:55:00 PM
I can understand this feeling. Well penned! :)
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Date: 10/28/2017 2:58:00 PM
Thank you Carol.
Date: 10/28/2017 1:47:00 PM
I am with you Jean...you express this so well
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Date: 10/31/2017 9:02:00 PM
LOL
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Date: 10/28/2017 1:56:00 PM
Really Tim? I thought it was that other fellow. But you will do nicely.
Date: 10/28/2017 8:05:00 AM
Wonderful pen Jean :) xomo
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Date: 10/28/2017 8:15:00 AM
Hi Maureen. Thank you.
Date: 10/28/2017 7:55:00 AM
physical touch is someone we never stop missing. A bittersweet write, Jean, well done. Hugs
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Date: 10/28/2017 8:11:00 AM
A beautiful slip of the pen Becca. We met seven years ago. The attraction is still vast, as is the distance between us.
Date: 10/28/2017 7:39:00 AM
Lovely poem Jean--feelings well expressed with lot of warmth and desire!
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Date: 10/28/2017 7:41:00 AM
Thank you Vijay. I hope you don't mind me using your quote. I always get my spellings wrong. Corrected now.