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Touch Me

I longed to feel touch today but had no hand to hold and so I looked to an earthen way the tenderness it longed to unfold Down the beach I strolled my feet upon sweet grains of sand they reached in and hugged my toes I found touch today in the land The spray of the sea tasted my lips with a passionate plea for one more kiss When moody clouds concealed the light his rain fell down and kissed my eyes It ran its length down my hair and caressed my skin like it cared Just as I was about to leave my rendezvous with natures love the breath of God exhaled the wind and playfully gave me a shove I longed to feel touch today feeling so very alone that's when the earth made a way to say in its embrace I am home Sitting by the fire now In a cozy gentle warmth tears fall for I know not how this loving day began with remorse

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Date: 3/31/2014 1:15:00 PM
Thanks, you are a sweetheart. I feel like I am the lucky one to be with her.
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Date: 3/30/2014 11:32:00 AM
I didn't realize when I wrote my poem yesterday I used your title. It must have stuck in my head without me realizing it. Let me know if you want me to change it, I don't want to plagorize you.
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Sarai Virden
Date: 3/31/2014 1:07:00 PM
Oh, don't fret over it Rick, that's a non-issue for me. Loved your Touch Me poem by the way.... Wow, how sensual. She's a lucky lady to have a man with a poets soul. Blessings my friend <3
Date: 3/28/2014 10:42:00 AM
Lovely write Sarai. The touch of nature, turning into the touch of love and comfort. // paul
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Sarai Virden
Date: 3/31/2014 1:12:00 PM
Yes Paul, it was a new experience for me and an amazing day. Blessings my friend :-)
Date: 3/28/2014 7:26:00 AM
This is such a lovely thought. Put your arms around yourself and you will be hugging a child of God.
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Sarai Virden
Date: 3/31/2014 1:04:00 PM
Ah thanks Rick... How sweet :-)

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