Totems In the Darkend Sky

The story goes; there was a sacrifice in the graveyard hundreds of years ago. A man had done wrong and tarnished the name of his own. The woman would take no bribe. So together they died. Walking through the grave yard in the dead of the night. Stepping on the corpse of the dead no longer alive. Reading the names of those who died and were sacrificed. Storm clouds rolling in blanketing the darkened sky. Remembering the stories that were told of the secrets the totem poles hold. Will we ever know what the totem poles have to tell? As we stand here in the middle of hell.
by Cory long
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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August 14, 2011 at 11:28 PM
enjoyed, Cory,,...p.d.
Johnson Avatar
August 12, 2011 at 6:01 AM
Cory, Got to watch them cementries babe, corpses springing out taking slaves , repossesion, coffin trade, watch out till, chucky duk gets laid:) perhaps.
Sweetheart Avatar
August 11, 2011 at 7:22 PM
what a fantastic tale in poetry cory.. good luck in the contest.. I like the she would not take a bribe line..luv..
Brown Avatar
August 11, 2011 at 11:20 AM
Your poetry has amazed me today Cory. Thank you for posting it for us all to read and enjoy. Hoping you have a wonderful inspiration filled day. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
August 11, 2011 at 9:39 AM
Interesting work penned in this one...Kind of scary...Sara
Susan Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 8:25 PM
a dark story...i like it! good luck in the contest :)
Osita Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 2:22 PM
Wow! Very nice.It's filled with imagery.Best wishes in the contest!
Roberts Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 12:36 PM
not showing on the contest page Cory, please enter
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