* Totally Complete

Holding hands in the crisp fall air.
Neither one speaking, both lost in
their own thoughts of each other.
Together they make 'one' and that
makes them totally complete.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Al-Riyami Avatar
June 18, 2009 at 4:59 AM
It Does=Youve captured That well.<3Rockin'
Guzzi Avatar
June 17, 2009 at 4:35 PM
one and 1 make two, thinking anything else though romatic, in the end leads to a devaluation of each. We are not halves. We are whole. Two wholes chosing to make a third when ready......Loved the verse, as a verse!
Richards Avatar
June 16, 2009 at 7:01 AM
Nice one, Rhonda! Very soft. ~ Carrie
Goff Avatar
June 16, 2009 at 3:06 AM
this is very sweet, Rhonda, jim
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