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Totally Appalled

I support you
Through the thick and thin of it all
I support you
When you're sick or when so blue
When money's tight and trouble falls
When I am totally appalled
I support you  

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/10/2015 2:15:00 PM
Nicely done on this one Sara. Show a character to stand even when appalled. Hope all is well with you and that you are feeling better now. Been very busy this summer and have not been writing a lot but hope to slowly get back into it. love phyl
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Date: 8/10/2015 12:13:00 AM
I sense a strong character may be in you Sara..' Though this is just a write.' good to read such lines today, all my best Joe..'
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/10/2015 6:45:00 AM
Joe, I am sure that I am a strong character because both my parents were strong characters or just characters..LOL.. Thanks for dropping by.. Sara

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