Bl Devnath Poet Senryu

Total Ablution

washing of body
                                       if done with dirty water
                                        there's no refreshment

                                            Total ablution
                                   means cleaning all kinds of dirt
                                       from  body mind heart

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Poet Destroyer A January 15, 2015 at 11:25 PM Anytime BL, i really miss my friends... PD Bl Devnath January 16, 2015 at 3:13 AM Thanks...always for your inspiration. Loved always, my *friend,bl

Poet Destroyer A January 15, 2015 at 11:16 PM This is deep my friend... I truly miss reading your poems... always ~LINDA Bl Devnath January 15, 2015 at 11:22 PM Thanks my lovely *friend for your saying it deep with comment. Loved always, bl

Harry Horsman January 14, 2015 at 7:09 AM love this, all of what you write does indeed cleanse the soul Bl Devnath January 14, 2015 at 9:19 AM True love whispers with true spirit to cleanse which the soul seeks. My genius friend, you know well that, i know. Thanks... Loved always,my lovely friend,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen January 13, 2015 at 11:33 AM - A proper washing ...... sometimes absolutely necessary (from body,mind and heart) - well written, Bl - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Bl Devnath January 13, 2015 at 11:38 AM Thanks my lovely friend for stopping by on my poem. Loved always,bl