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Toska

I'm missing someone Few days back, I found I'm in need of something My heart condemned to agro A feeling of distinct dissatisfaction Like a nail hammered in place A bottomless void lay pitted And was rendered vulnerable Even now as I reminisce I perceive a hint of that deep-set twinge In my chest, I'm hardly at rest You can hardly compare the snail's symptoms Of loneliness and impuissance to that of the snake's -Toska

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Date: 11/23/2024 4:23:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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