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'tortured Love'

I saw a pretty woman, At the book store! She was amazing, As described in the folklore! Her beauty glistened, Under the yellow light! I had to make sure, She was within my eye sight! ‘What Men Want’, Was the book she was reading! I took a closer look, N saw her right ear was bleeding! Abused n tortured, She was by her man! I wonder whether she considered, Hanging herself by the fan! Humbled by her efforts, To satisfy her man! I wished I could go there, N give her a hand! Dedicated to all ‘Tortured Soul’s’ who have been or are in an abusive relationship, just because they love their better half immensely! Let us all say NO to Domestic Violence.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/28/2010 1:08:00 PM
BRAVO, ENJOYED YOUR WRITE -SKAT
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Date: 7/28/2010 9:17:00 AM
Jose, I love your dedications on your poems - Welcome to PoetrySoup! Ck your Soup Mail for some additional thoughts! - Best, Karen
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Date: 7/28/2010 12:48:00 AM
Amen! Good poem and great message! - All the best, Karen
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