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Tortoise

Come wrestle with a gator! Said the poster at the fair. With tape around its mouth, it looked Pathetic in its lair. Yet in a cage adjoining it, A tortoise ambled 'round, Its movements sure and steady, One foot lifting off the ground. With claws extended, it appeared To glide on tippy toes; Its ancient eyes gazed straight ahead, A true reptilian pose. The children leaned and stroked its shell. It didn't seem to mind, Although I'm sure it would have liked A stroke from its own kind. That tortoise kept on moving, Though perhaps to help prepare For a coming-soon encounter With an unsuspecting hare!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/18/2016 2:41:00 PM
Delightful! Clever and fun.
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Date: 12/3/2012 3:06:00 PM
Always such an enjoyable write ilene. Your words always paint such a clever scene.
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Date: 12/3/2012 11:28:00 AM
This poem is really quite zoological triumph! Glad you liked my Chankah poem. I also have an article about Chanukah in the next issue of Barr's Postcard News. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 12/3/2012 4:37:00 AM
lovely share...feel so nice reading your great work..thank you Ilene...have a wonderful blessing day.....much luv <3 SK
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Date: 12/2/2012 9:35:00 PM
Lol, I knew Jon would like it. I like it too, Ilene. It is so cute, especially when you said "its ancient eyes". They do look ancient, don't they? They are adorable, so regal in their own way :)
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Date: 12/2/2012 7:26:00 PM
I love this so much. This poem is a true gem. A poem about animals with witty charm. This will be going among my favorites. Awesome poem!
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