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Torrential Rain

rain keeps coming down
torrential bursts of fury
Mother Nature’s furious

Written October 3, 2022

rainweatherhaiku

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/4/2022 9:11:00 AM

I think mother nature is furious; and we hear and see her wrath!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/4/2022 11:16:00 AM

We do, especially in the hurricanes, tornadoes, and severe storms in the midwest.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/3/2022 5:58:00 PM

Yikes! Best to sing, rain…rain go away..

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/3/2022 7:06:00 PM

...come again another day! Yeah!

Michael Tor

Date: 10/3/2022 1:41:00 PM

Yes Milton when she is furious watch out head for cover, for she means business. Love your theme, which is very true...

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/3/2022 3:07:00 PM

Thanks, Michael, for your read and your faithful commenting.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/3/2022 10:52:00 AM

Hi. Milt. You must be experiencing this, huh? Is it over now?

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/3/2022 3:08:00 PM

Yep, we had cloudy skies all this morning, but around noon it started clearing up, and we have sunshine now. Yesterday Mother Nature was furious; I suppose the remnant of Ian that we got.

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