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Tornado Season

TORNADO SEASON

  storms
 of spring
happening
                                 disfiguring
                                     squalls
                                          ~
                                      flash
                                    of light
                               reveals plight
roar of thunder
        quick
             ~
          hiss
       of train
                                the cyclone
                               slithers like a
                                      snake


4/4/2017
Brian Strand’s Standard Contest
Lanterne Form

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/5/2017 3:35:00 PM
Live in the alley, know all about them. Well done Kim, best wishes...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/5/2017 7:36:00 PM
Thanks so much! Thankfully the day has been calm! Lotsa rain but no hail! Yay!
Date: 4/5/2017 6:15:00 AM
I liked this a lot Kim. have never faced a tornado and hope I never do.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/5/2017 7:28:00 AM
Today is scary in the South!
Date: 4/4/2017 11:25:00 PM
This is a cool poem format!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/5/2017 7:28:00 AM
Thank you! :)
Date: 4/4/2017 10:54:00 PM
Beautiful theme for the Contest... Great composition... Good luck with the contest.... A big 7....
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/5/2017 7:33:00 AM
Thanks so much, Supraja!

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