Kim Rodrigues Poet Lanterne

Tornado Season

TORNADO SEASON

  storms
 of spring
happening
                                 disfiguring
                                     squalls
                                          ~
                                      flash
                                    of light
                               reveals plight
roar of thunder
        quick
             ~
          hiss
       of train
                                the cyclone
                               slithers like a
                                      snake


4/4/2017
Brian Strand’s Standard Contest
Lanterne Form

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Charlie Smith April 5, 2017 at 3:35 PM Live in the alley, know all about them. Well done Kim, best wishes... Kim Rodrigues April 5, 2017 at 7:36 PM Thanks so much! Thankfully the day has been calm! Lotsa rain but no hail! Yay!

Chris Green April 5, 2017 at 6:15 AM I liked this a lot Kim. have never faced a tornado and hope I never do. Kim Rodrigues April 5, 2017 at 7:28 AM Today is scary in the South!

Poetprentice Dupins April 4, 2017 at 11:25 PM This is a cool poem format! Kim Rodrigues April 5, 2017 at 7:28 AM Thank you! :)

Supraja Kannan April 4, 2017 at 10:54 PM Beautiful theme for the Contest... Great composition... Good luck with the contest.... A big 7.... Kim Rodrigues April 5, 2017 at 7:33 AM Thanks so much, Supraja!