Torn Apart - Repost

Tiny Devils leaking out of my pen, running over the page
                         Hell bent on desolation, DEATH and destruction
                     All  Love, Friendship, Kindness, slaughtered  in Rage
                       A temple to our lord ; with tridents start construction


                      The tainted walls built with innocent blood, lies, deceit
                        Four corner towers: Murder, Hate, Infidelity, and Lust
                       One Demon looked up at me “Do YOU declare defeat?”
                                               Come Comrade join US
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Scripca Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 6:05 PM
You don't need a fly swatter but a devil one :) Stay still until they leak out of you pen and then...Got you!!! :) Sneaky little devils...All the best, iolanda (with wings)
Haick Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 12:51 PM
Those demons are sneaky, HG..they are forever pesky..invading lives. I must thank you for your kind wishes, HG! Thank you and God bless, always! Love, Audrey
Mehta Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 7:49 AM
Very frolicsome, witty and sarcastic write, HG
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