Amber Rose Poet I do not know?

Torn

A wall of bricks between us
Almost Impossible to take apart
every time we try,it breaks both our hearts
Even though we are meant to be
The whole world always disagrees

We could never love another
Like we love each other
But no one now can take the blame
The feelings will still be the same
Fight after fight
You can never be my knight

All the hurt you put me through
Yet still our love is always true
Love just may truly be blind
And has been before our time
Just close our eyes and pretend
That this moment will never end
 
Is there anything else left to mend
We were meant to be more then friends
It is funny how things can change in time
And how you will never be again be mine
So maybe if we were in another life
I wouldn't have to use this knife

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Carol Sunshine Brown June 19, 2012 at 6:00 AM A belated but warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Amber. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol 06/19

Pace Ink-U-Script June 19, 2012 at 2:43 AM Excellent poem written here!!

Vicky Tsiluma June 18, 2012 at 3:30 AM I feel the pain. That last line is definitely poignant. It's crazy how much humans have to fight against a system we ourselves created. Nice poem Amber! Amber Rose June 18, 2012 at 11:44 AM Thank-you

Jacob Cra June 17, 2012 at 6:19 PM LOVE IT!!!... it's so good! It's probably... you'll never believe this... one of my favorites!Once again, I want you to know that this poem is incredible... you should really think about getting it published. I know a great website that publishes poetry in a book and you can win prizes. (It's a contest.) You could easily win; this poem is dynamite! Visit poeticpossibilities.tk and you'll find it under the tab: "Monthly Contest." You really should enter it... it is a truly outstanding poem. Amber Rose June 17, 2012 at 6:20 PM Thanks and I will go to that website

Jacob Cra June 17, 2012 at 6:11 PM I love this poem... it's so good! It's probably... you'll never believe this... one of my favorites!Once again, I want you to know that this poem is incredible... you should really think about getting it published. I know a great website that publishes poetry in a book and you can win prizes. (It's a contest.) You could easily win; this poem is dynamite! Visit poeticpossibilities.tk and you'll find it under the tab: "Monthly Contest." You really should enter it... it is a truly outstanding poem.