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Tormented Mind

The tormented mind cries in silence, the pain is almost too much to bare; always having to put on a false face, pretending that you care. There is no magic cure all pill, believe me I've tried them all; You just have to keep on going, hoping you don't finally fall. At times the pain is overwhelming, giving up would be the easy way out; I know in my heart that's not an option, although my mind is filled with doubt.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/19/2024 6:24:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/8/2016 12:56:00 PM
awesome poem. LINDA
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Date: 5/18/2011 3:50:00 PM
I feel you very much on this one. I have to wear a mask a lot of times. Great write, and thank you so much for your kind comments on "Face the Truth" R.M.
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Date: 5/18/2011 11:37:00 AM
I am spending my morning reading wonderful poetry and enjoying it so much. I am so impressed with the poems I have read so far this morning. I am happy yours was among them Victoria. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors always. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/18/2011 9:32:00 AM
Love the poem, love the title love the poet. Great writing Victoria, Great!! Gave you a 7 keep on writing.
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