Torment

a sad story life
that could be written
in multiple paper pads
is now in one word:


tired
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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De Beaulieu Avatar
September 1, 2020 at 11:53 AM
Hello Maris Tuazon, I am not sure but I think this poetry form is verse or Senyu. Yes torment thumbs it up in one word. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 5, 2020 at 3:35 PM
Hello Maris Tuazon, you are welcome my friend. Your friend, Darlene
Tuazon Avatar
September 4, 2020 at 4:47 PM
Thank you once again Darlene.:) TC.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 2, 2020 at 11:20 AM
Hello Mariis Tuazon, it is okay to change the poetry form when you feel it is the wrong for, Your poem has a lot of meaning. You are welcome . Enjoy your day my friend.
Tuazon Avatar
September 1, 2020 at 3:08 PM
Thank you as always Darlene for stopping by and commemting. I just changed it in verse form. I wanted to do this as tanka but I am really so dense and so down till now because of some stuff. I couldn't do the like abrupt turn in the third line that's why. Thank you once again . I highly appreciate it. Keep safe. -- Marissa
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