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Torment

a sad story life that could be written in multiple paper pads is now in one word: tired

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/1/2020 11:53:00 AM

Hello Maris Tuazon, I am not sure but I think this poetry form is verse or Senyu. Yes torment thumbs it up in one word. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/5/2020 3:35:00 PM

Hello Maris Tuazon, you are welcome my friend. Your friend, Darlene

Maris Warrior Tuazon
Date: 9/4/2020 4:47:00 PM

Thank you once again Darlene.:) TC.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/2/2020 11:20:00 AM

Hello Mariis Tuazon, it is okay to change the poetry form when you feel it is the wrong for, Your poem has a lot of meaning. You are welcome . Enjoy your day my friend.

Maris Warrior Tuazon
Date: 9/1/2020 3:08:00 PM

Thank you as always Darlene for stopping by and commemting. I just changed it in verse form. I wanted to do this as tanka but I am really so dense and so down till now because of some stuff. I couldn't do the like abrupt turn in the third line that's why. Thank you once again . I highly appreciate it. Keep safe. -- Marissa