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Sometimes I try to figure out what is going unsaid But sometimes with the troubles I have they are better left unsaid Should I just give a card and leave well enough alone or throw caution into the wind and break my silent growns You indeed have found my full attention and with it comes good intentions But in all fairness I must first mintion That a darkness is held over my commision And what is my commision? The pursuit of one who showed a little intrest in me A friendly conversation a smile just ment for me To think of you I have new hopes Day and night You fill my dreams But I have to face reality About the illusive scene And if my eyes deceived me Then I beg you please forgive Burn this note with all my pursuits find my flatterings of so little use Please treat me with as little abuse As one who loved with little excuse (Repost)

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Date: 9/10/2012 8:22:00 AM
Divine sentiment...the response might be in the silence. Cynthia
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Date: 9/5/2012 7:00:00 PM
Nice that you reposted this poem. Sometimes things are left better unsaid but some times one has to speak out too. It should be thought thru clearly before a decision is made. Well I think I have caught up on all your poems. love phyl
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Date: 9/4/2012 9:17:00 AM
Soup mail for you...Sara
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Date: 9/3/2012 5:17:00 PM
there's always someone...I take it things didn't end happily?
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John Loving III
Date: 9/4/2012 10:26:00 AM
Not too badly. That was just before april came along. But when she saw april and my happiness.she tried to step in. Once after april died I looked at her and said "we could have that date now." Poor judy.
Date: 8/31/2012 9:36:00 PM
It's tender and heartfelt words I read here...a heart with out answers to so many questions. Enjoyed the read !!
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Date: 8/31/2012 8:04:00 AM
Such profoundness here, awesome to read, enjoyed this.
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Date: 8/31/2012 5:30:00 AM
I remembered the second stanza..Interesting work ...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/31/2012 5:30:00 AM
Trying to do a poem with several facets helps one to think..You know plan ahead thnk... Sara
Date: 8/31/2012 4:23:00 AM
LOVELY WRITE
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Date: 8/31/2012 2:22:00 AM
Very indepth, I feel privledged to read your excellent poetry so early this morning, take good care, Cindy
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Date: 8/31/2012 12:29:00 AM
Somethings are okay left unsaid... reality, how scary... still we have to face it... an amazing poem,, love the re-post...always~PD
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John Loving III
Date: 8/31/2012 1:23:00 AM
It reminds me of you
Date: 8/30/2012 11:46:00 PM
I'm glad you decided to repost this otherwise I would have missed it. Smooth flow you've got going here. A couple of typos which hamper reading but a gem either way. :)
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John Loving III
Date: 8/31/2012 1:21:00 AM
Fixed typos