Top Secret

Sometimes I try to figure out
what is going unsaid
But sometimes with the troubles I have
they are better left unsaid

Should I just give a card
and leave well enough alone
or throw caution into the wind
and break my silent growns

You indeed have found my full attention
and with it comes good intentions
But in all fairness I must first mintion
That a darkness is held over my commision

And what is my commision?

The pursuit of one who showed
a little intrest in me
A friendly conversation
a smile just ment for me

To think of you
I have new hopes
Day and night 
You fill my dreams

But I have to face reality
About the illusive scene
And if my eyes deceived me
Then I beg you please forgive

Burn this note with all my pursuits
find my flatterings of so little use
Please treat me with as little abuse
As one who loved with little excuse

(Repost)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Alvez Avatar
September 10, 2012 at 8:22 AM
Divine sentiment...the response might be in the silence. Cynthia
Babcock Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 7:00 PM
Nice that you reposted this poem. Sometimes things are left better unsaid but some times one has to speak out too. It should be thought thru clearly before a decision is made. Well I think I have caught up on all your poems. love phyl
Kendrick Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 9:17 AM
Soup mail for you...Sara
Puddifoot Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 5:17 PM
there's always someone...I take it things didn't end happily?
Squyres Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 9:36 PM
It's tender and heartfelt words I read here...a heart with out answers to so many questions. Enjoyed the read !!
Horsman Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 8:04 AM
Such profoundness here, awesome to read, enjoyed this.
Kendrick Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 5:30 AM
I remembered the second stanza..Interesting work ...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Kendrick Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 5:30 AM
Trying to do a poem with several facets helps one to think..You know plan ahead thnk... Sara
Hu Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 4:23 AM
LOVELY WRITE
Cayton Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 2:22 AM
Very indepth, I feel privledged to read your excellent poetry so early this morning, take good care, Cindy
A   Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 12:29 AM
Somethings are okay left unsaid... reality, how scary... still we have to face it... an amazing poem,, love the re-post...always~PD
Hendricks Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 11:46 PM
I'm glad you decided to repost this otherwise I would have missed it. Smooth flow you've got going here. A couple of typos which hamper reading but a gem either way. :)
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