Top of the World

Thin screen of nature Glory of omnipresent...... God bursts all over Green screen of nature Stones, streams, the shallow murmur… God bursts all over The splendid structure Can't comprehend perfectly..... Feel humility.
======================= Dr.Ram Mehta Fourth Place Win in: Contest : Top of the World sponsored by S K A T
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A  Avatar
May 23, 2015 at 11:17 AM
AWESOME ONCE AGAIN
Brown Avatar
November 18, 2011 at 5:55 AM
Congratulations on your placement in S.K.A.T.'s "Top Of The World" contest Dr. Ram. Love, Carol
A   Avatar
November 18, 2011 at 2:43 AM
dr ram, congratualtions on your TOP OF THE WORLD haiku entry, Take care,..p.d.
Mccormick Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 11:10 AM
Splendid! Your last 2 lines are priceless! :)~ECMc
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November 16, 2011 at 10:21 AM
Congrats my friend on your success Michael
Sweetheart Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 7:58 AM
Congrats Dr. Ram on a splendid series of Haikus for the contest.. very impressive words of expression my friend.. hope u are doing well..luv..
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November 16, 2011 at 4:07 AM
Beautiful, sir. Congrats.
A  Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 2:46 AM
congrats in my contest..~LUV*SKAT
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