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Top Of The Morning To You

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top of the morning
the sky is winking at you 
open wide your eyes

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John Fleming

Date: 8/20/2025 8:55:00 AM

Now there is a phrase I have not heard for quite a while: "Top of the morning". Lovely way to start any poem. Nicely put together, Rose. :) john

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/20/2025 3:11:00 PM

its an old saying but a goodie John thanks for leaving a comment

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/19/2025 5:34:00 PM

'sky winking' - perfect personification. It made me smile :-) hugs, Sara

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/20/2025 3:11:00 PM

I always see the sky as bestowing so much beauty if we only looked Sara !

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/19/2025 5:31:00 AM

- A lovely and sweet poem, Vie Rose :) - hugs

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/19/2025 10:04:00 AM

thank you dear Anne, hope your keeping well :)