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Dress me O Lord each new morn in your attire- to rescue others from the mire Inspired by W B Yeats pem entitled 'He wishes for the clothes of heaven'

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Kristin Reynolds

Date: 11/22/2008 4:30:00 PM

Brian, this one really got to me, this is excellent, truly, an amazing ins;iring write. I must have this for my favorites. An awesome message, and the perfect form for God's perfection. amazing, love Kristin

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/22/2008 2:24:00 PM

Brian, this actually evokes the feeling I felt when I wrote my Christmas poem. You say so much in beautiful form. Love, Shar

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 11/22/2008 12:31:00 PM

Wonderful Fibonacci, Brian, and an inspired title. Great write. Best wishes, Nigel

Michael Torres

Date: 11/22/2008 12:25:00 PM

Brian tell me what store I can get those fine clothes that you so cleverly write about . Beautiful Brian brought a tear to my eyes thank you for your loving support Michael Torres You have lifted me with your kindness and love.

John Loving Iii

Date: 11/22/2008 8:36:00 AM

TOP GEAR Brain this is top gear. you lifted my spirit i'm typing faster. dress me dress me! O Lord. dress me. John H. Loving III