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Tooth Cheese

Braces make brushing difficult Be warned!! don't regale others With tooth cheese --yuck! Brush veraciously, two minutes or more Two or three times a day clean around those brackets Or your teeth will crumble!

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Lynette Chachere

Date: 8/31/2010 3:42:00 PM

right! right! i had braces before. keep em' clean! ~Always

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 8/29/2010 3:23:00 PM

Doris! My teef fell out!

Jayne Eggins

Date: 8/29/2010 12:26:00 AM

lol Doris I had to laugh at this one lol I am still smiling ... cant not nice work and thanks for the comment on my poem much appreciated love Jayne x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/28/2010 8:25:00 PM

oooh, don't scare me. I am lucky if I do it a full minute! cute one. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/28/2010 7:09:00 PM

A nice advice to keep the teeth intact, Doric

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/28/2010 4:49:00 PM

Cute piece Doris... luv your title my friend.. makes the poem really interesting... and have seen some with braces and what they endure to enjoy food.. enjoyed.. this happy weekend.. my son is doing much better ..thankxxx for your prayers..for they produce miracles..luv..

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 8/28/2010 2:36:00 PM

ok must be just enjoying the weekend i hope so thanks for all of your kind comments faleshia

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/28/2010 12:59:00 PM

Well, this is kinda disgusting..I hope that Caleb isn't guilty of this...Mom

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/28/2010 12:28:00 PM

You are silly Doris, I used metaphors in my last post.. Just trying something different.(((( LOL, to your poem,,glad i brush that yellow off daily,..p.d.