Tooth Cheese

Braces make brushing difficult
Be warned!! don't regale others
With tooth cheese --yuck!
Brush veraciously, two minutes or more
Two or three times a day
clean around those brackets
Or your teeth will crumble!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chachere Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 3:42 PM
right! right! i had braces before. keep em' clean! ~Always
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 3:23 PM
Doris! My teef fell out!
Eggins Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 12:26 AM
lol Doris I had to laugh at this one lol I am still smiling ... cant not nice work and thanks for the comment on my poem much appreciated love Jayne x
Dietrich Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 8:25 PM
oooh, don't scare me. I am lucky if I do it a full minute! cute one. LUv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 7:09 PM
A nice advice to keep the teeth intact, Doric
Sweetheart Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 4:49 PM
Cute piece Doris... luv your title my friend.. makes the poem really interesting... and have seen some with braces and what they endure to enjoy food.. enjoyed.. this happy weekend.. my son is doing much better ..thankxxx for your prayers..for they produce miracles..luv..
Murphy Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 2:36 PM
ok must be just enjoying the weekend i hope so thanks for all of your kind comments faleshia
Kendrick Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 12:59 PM
Well, this is kinda disgusting..I hope that Caleb isn't guilty of this...Mom
A   Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 12:28 PM
You are silly Doris, I used metaphors in my last post.. Just trying something different.(((( LOL, to your poem,,glad i brush that yellow off daily,..p.d.
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