Too Young

So young My heart For evermore? Not enough. I can't grasp see my mind body still like a hundred sparkling lights empty nights A hundred galloping horses Fresh mermaid bestows a gift upon me Alone through my window I see the night A hundred lights .....

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Skat A

Date: 1/18/2016 1:17:00 PM

Sofija, Awesome write, Thank You for sharing... SKAT...

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/8/2014 11:39:00 AM

love the image of galloping horses beauytifully painted piece

Gary Bateman

Date: 12/7/2014 12:47:00 PM

Sofija, Another very good Ballade write!! Your words are few, but say so much and the imagery you've employed stays with the reader: "a hundred galloping horses" and "Fresh mermaid bestows . . . ." Keeping writing and to do try some future free verse writes on topics you wish to write about. Eventually you'll be able to branch out to even more formats!! Another "7" from me!! And continued best wishes, Gary

Sofija Bolic
Date: 12/8/2014 11:32:00 AM

Thank you so much! :)) - Sofija

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/7/2014 7:00:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Sofija - I choose your first lovely and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sofija Bolic
Date: 12/8/2014 11:31:00 AM

Nice to meet you too! :) I look forward to reading more poems here :) - Sofija

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 12/6/2014 3:07:00 PM

galloping horses in the sun lights in the night... Beautiful images,best regards,O.B

Sofija Bolic
Date: 12/8/2014 11:32:00 AM

Thank you! :)) - Sofija