Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

Too Young

Married young with miles separating our love,                                              each time you left it was like a flying dove.                                                    You were my belove,                                                                                       I was your truelove.


Missing you all day and all night,                                                                      I wanted to take flight.                                                                                You were my loving knight,                                                                           for days you would be working out of sight.                                                 Each return you brought your loving light,                                                     you would always make things alright.
  


Date Written: 6/25/2020

4 Place    Sensuality Contest Judged:7/1/2020 Sponsored by: Silent One

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Aditi Mishra July 5, 2020 at 3:22 PM The return of a knight in love truly brings loving light Paula. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love :) Paula Goldsmith July 5, 2020 at 4:01 PM Thank You, for your note and congratulations. Have a wonderful day with blessings............

Caren Krutsinger July 3, 2020 at 5:35 AM It is always great to have a loving knight; he sounds wonderful. Paula Goldsmith July 3, 2020 at 10:49 AM Thank You, for reading and for your note. Have a wonderful day...........

Silent One July 1, 2020 at 5:25 PM A nice poem, but i did not find it sensual..Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Paula Goldsmith July 1, 2020 at 5:47 PM Thank You, for your note and congratulations. Sorry, you did not find it sensual. It was about young love, being together then having to separate and then get back together. The being away made them long for each other even more. (sensual) Thank You, I am honored by this win.

Gershon Wolf June 25, 2020 at 9:38 PM Sounds like a traveling salesman or a business executive maybe (?)… A whiff of nostalgia here, Paula. These kind of marriages are far fewer these days, although jet-setters and movie stars still have them. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks, Gershon Paula Goldsmith June 26, 2020 at 10:57 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like it. Have a wonderful day and weekend............