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Too Soon

Like a train, life barrels by Never ending though it seems Yet when it crashed I had to cry It broke my heart and killed your dreams I lost you once and nevermore Would I be waiting for your smile I yearn to travel back before You felt that you were not worthwhile Just as we began to bond Life put you in your greatest state My memories are only fond Till your decision cleared the slate With highs come lows as you well know And like that train, you seldom crashed This final trip, your lowest low We sadly learned would be your last I say goodbye my humble friend Your words were wise and true With time I hope to comprehend How much I really meant to you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/5/2017 7:26:00 PM
Such a sad poem, Avery, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/14/2016 2:42:00 PM
Hi Avery, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. An excellent write....Vlad.
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Date: 3/13/2016 10:40:00 AM
Avery, Congratulations on your win. Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Stop by my blog "Names on Poetry Soup" if you like. It would be nice to hear from you and all those who I honored with a placement. XOX ~LINDA~
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