Jay Loveless Poet I do not know?

Too Scared (Revised/ Number 2)

Sometimes Im so scared to talk
so scared that i will walk up to you one day
and go for my smile and hug
and be 
~Rejected

Sometimes I can barely breath
barely breath so bad
because of you, you steal 
from me
~ My breath

Sometimes im so blind
i cant see a thing
because you 
fill up
~ My eyes

Sometimes i dont want to touch
because the feeling 
of your skin 
is like
~A Dream

Sometimes i want to taste
the flavor that is perfect for me
your lips touching so breifly
against anothers
~Mine

Sometimes i don't want to smell
your rich cologn 
because it lingers
and haunts
~ My mind

Sometimes i think i almost 
could wish that i didnt know you
because then
i wouldnt feel this
~ Love

Sometimes i wish i had the guts
to tell you how i feel
to let you know this is real
but then
~ I get too scared

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James Marshall Goff June 10, 2009 at 1:27 PM a beautiful love poem! Jese, James

Sajdah Al-Riyami June 8, 2009 at 10:07 AM I love both original & This Revised:But i prefer Revised Cs of the Structure.Keep on Writing;And "But,Ma" is regarding The Old Times Wid M'Mom,so Yew Shd Know weve all got These FamiLy-Probsz So um,Kisses:)(Very awkward as i Never actualy Write "Kisses":p)

Diane Christian June 5, 2009 at 12:28 PM aww love is a funny thing, I was nervours to tell all at first too, but when my husband told me the first time I told him right back I love you too, he was scared too, he thought i would run a mile but I didn't and we met in december 2007 and we were married in april 2008, yea just 4 months, so sometimes love comes fast and smoth, you could explain and ask how they would feel if you said you think you have feelings for them see how they take it then build up to it, God bless you from diane