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Too Quick To Judge

Some people think I can't rhyme but my lyrical skills are sublime. They take one look and think they know but I'll hit you with my beat and you will reap what you sow. Judging me quick at the very first glance but when my beat hits you, all you'll wanna do is dance. Too quick to judge, too quick to label, with my rhyming and timing, I am more than able. So let my rhythm get you straight in the heart. Don't be quick to judge right from the start. Listen to my lyrics and my melody, open your mind and truly be free.

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Mark J. Halliday

Date: 5/26/2014 11:36:00 PM

I could feel the rhythm. Nice

J.W. Earnings

Date: 4/24/2014 4:30:00 PM

I like the feeling of rage and passion mixed together. Amazing...I love the title. It caught my eye ( -) Haha! You had a rhyme scheme here and I know you can rhyme (you are a poetess that's why). Anyways, keep writing with your might. -DWB

Jenny Brewer
Date: 4/24/2014 5:04:00 PM

Thank you David, Your kind words are appreciated.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/8/2014 3:00:00 PM

loved this lyric Jenny - you just need the music to go with the words. Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 3/12/2014 5:38:00 AM

Jenny - I think you should look at the title - think you are being harsh on yourself :-; Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 3/11/2014 6:21:00 PM

You are too hard on yourself Jenny xx jan

Jenny Brewer
Date: 3/10/2014 6:17:00 PM

Thank you my friend but I think I should start again and try harder xx