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Too Much To Ask

The loneliness here is too much to bear My heart's desire Is for someone to care To share my hopes And weave our dreams To love unconditionally without any strings.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/16/2011 5:47:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Jody. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 11/14/2011 6:55:00 AM
Lovely expressions, I like the last two lines, Jody
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Date: 11/12/2011 11:11:00 PM
JODY,, I GOT TIRED OF ASKING MY X- TO FEEL.. WELLL..NOW SOMEONE, ELSE OWNS MY HEART... ENJOYED,..P.D.
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