Too Much To Ask

The loneliness here 
  is too much to bear
  
My heart's desire 
  Is for someone to care

To share my hopes
  And weave our dreams

To love unconditionally 
  without any strings.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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November 16, 2011 at 5:47 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Jody. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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November 14, 2011 at 6:55 AM
Lovely expressions, I like the last two lines, Jody
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November 12, 2011 at 11:11 PM
JODY,, I GOT TIRED OF ASKING MY X- TO FEEL.. WELLL..NOW SOMEONE, ELSE OWNS MY HEART... ENJOYED,..P.D.
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