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Too Much Sun

Some guys are cut out for retirement That certainly doesn't apply to me If I had my druthers, I'd still be working This is surely not my cup of tea Used to be such an active fellow Was hard at work twenty-four seven Up until virtually all hours of the night Now I'm lucky if I make it past eleven This poetry site is my saving grace Without it, I'd surely go berserk Well maybe that's overstating my case But you get it, I thrive on work Perhaps there's a big surprise in store I'll inherit a million big ones From a distant long lost cousin of mine Seems I'm getting a little too much sun!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/25/2018 1:37:00 PM
Keep on keeping on Jack, never give up.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/25/2018 1:56:00 PM
My ship is still sailing... the storm is way over the horizon I've heard!!!
Date: 5/25/2018 11:07:00 AM
Can't see you ever retiring my friend.. Love your bio and im happy you have a place to find peace and joy...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/25/2018 1:24:00 PM
This site definitely be it... absolutely no question about it!!! Have a fantastic day good buddy!!!
Date: 5/25/2018 7:41:00 AM
Keep on keeping on sweet Happy Jack <3 xomo!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/25/2018 7:45:00 AM
No sign of the setting sun yet!!! Keeping on keeping on coz my dear sweet Mo said to! XOX

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