Too Much Rain

Peony petal
in soggy piles on the ground—
victims of the rain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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May 9, 2024 at 4:18 PM
Rain can damage petals but nourish the plant. I like the double subjects of nature; the peony and the rain.
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