Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Poet Rhyme

Too Much Pain

Too Much Pain

My heart is confounded.
My mind was astounded.
Compassion grew thick.
When someone was sick.

I used my best judgment.
To help with the ailment
My kindness backfired.
Now, my head is in mire.

I hope that my God will
Send comfort from His hill.
And brace up my hurt heart.
As living now seems tart--

I learned a hard lesson.
So, now I am regressing.
Back to my sheltered place
That is lost behind...my face.

Until never—

© Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
March 16, 2010
Poetic form: Rhyme

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen March 18, 2010 at 1:32 AM Thank you for all of your wonderful comments. I am feeling better, now. Smiles, Dane Ann

Ernilando Tugaff March 18, 2010 at 12:53 AM Dane Ann, beyond the mountains of harship, lies the valley of success. There is always light at the end of a tunnel. Ernilando

Carolyn Devonshire March 17, 2010 at 5:10 PM I hate to think of you like this, Dane Ann, and hope you are feeling better now. You usually radiate joy and love, and that's how it should be, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Mitch White March 17, 2010 at 4:00 AM Profound expressions, bless your heart for caring

Noel Villarosa March 17, 2010 at 3:18 AM God wills our existence. Everything has a purpose, Dane Ann. (^_^) Noel.

Margaret Foster March 16, 2010 at 6:50 PM Sometimes people who are hurting and don't know why will cast around for reasons, and someone to blame . you just happened to be handy. Don't withhold your kindness and concern for others because of this unfortunate turn out... blessings Margaret

Colleen Bono March 16, 2010 at 6:34 PM I am sorry I used your name and have since removed it.I was wrong.You were only try to help.Hope there are no hard feelings.

Colleen Bono March 16, 2010 at 6:32 PM I am sorry for using your name.I have since removed it.I know you tried to help me and I was wrong.I want to thank you for your help and I hope there are no hard feelings.

Debbie Guzzi March 16, 2010 at 5:09 PM Yes Dane..you did your best. You should just as you told me many times ..say sorry I missunderstood, I meant well....you both will be healed! Love's Ya

Ralph Taylor March 16, 2010 at 4:32 PM You did what you thought was right! one can't ask more than that. How you feel is normal but don't be discouraged because you were right! Chin up Dane Ann I would definitely want you on my side! - Ralph

Audrey Haick March 16, 2010 at 4:14 PM Dear Dane Ann, Please don't let misguided people stop you from doing good for someone who needs you. I can understand how you feel, but try to stay strong...God bless. Peace, and love, Audrey

John Beam March 16, 2010 at 3:16 PM very deep thanks for sharing he faithful and just to forgive us and cleanse us from all unrighteousness keep the faith with love in Christ Jesus