Too Loud

too loud
mass confusion
i sit there silently
just a blur, no words heard really
it's you

©Holly P. Moore
   November 2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Williams Avatar
November 22, 2012 at 12:46 AM
Holly I know the feeling well....have a good holiday...David
Guzzi Avatar
November 21, 2012 at 7:29 PM
Happy Thanksgiving Light & Love
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November 21, 2012 at 7:12 PM
Deep thoughts ......... well written Holly. - Do something special just for yourself tomorrow. - oxox / / Anne-Lise
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