Too Late

A 5-year old girl laughs and plays
A loving mother cooks her daughters meal
A kind a farther works hard to earn money

It only took an instant to start
2 minutes to spread
20 minutes to take everything

The firetruck didn't get there in time
They couldn't save the house
They couldn't save her

It started from a faulty stove
There was no where to run
No where to hide

The flames devoured everything
By a miracle she escaped
But now she has no home
And she has no mother

The rain sprinkled down
Too little, too late
She was gone
There was no replacing the holes in their hearts
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Agustin Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 6:49 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Stark Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 11:50 PM
Heartbreaking Hope she finds all the love All the happiness She always deserved Hope she gets a shelter so warm Huddled with people who can protect her I'm their arm
Bird Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 7:28 PM
THIS POEM IS AMAZING!! It's such a sad and morbid topic but you really expressed the feelings of everyone and the destruction the fires caused! AND this is your first poem on Poetry soup, keep it up, can't wait to see all the poems you post, I will be commenting all of them. My amazing friend Bonnie, you are an amazing poet, never be discouraged by things other people say to/ about you. Keep it up!!
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September 10, 2023 at 7:27 PM
OMG so dark, yet so amazing, it really captures the essence of their emotions and makes me feel it too! Keep writing, this was brilliant!
Bird Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 7:29 PM
I agree!!
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