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Too Late

A 5-year old girl laughs and plays A loving mother cooks her daughters meal A kind a farther works hard to earn money It only took an instant to start 2 minutes to spread 20 minutes to take everything The firetruck didn't get there in time They couldn't save the house They couldn't save her It started from a faulty stove There was no where to run No where to hide The flames devoured everything By a miracle she escaped But now she has no home And she has no mother The rain sprinkled down Too little, too late She was gone There was no replacing the holes in their hearts

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Date: 9/12/2023 6:49:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 9/10/2023 11:50:00 PM
Heartbreaking Hope she finds all the love All the happiness She always deserved Hope she gets a shelter so warm Huddled with people who can protect her I'm their arm
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Date: 9/10/2023 7:28:00 PM
THIS POEM IS AMAZING!! It's such a sad and morbid topic but you really expressed the feelings of everyone and the destruction the fires caused! AND this is your first poem on Poetry soup, keep it up, can't wait to see all the poems you post, I will be commenting all of them. My amazing friend Bonnie, you are an amazing poet, never be discouraged by things other people say to/ about you. Keep it up!!
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Date: 9/10/2023 7:27:00 PM
OMG so dark, yet so amazing, it really captures the essence of their emotions and makes me feel it too! Keep writing, this was brilliant!
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Date: 9/10/2023 7:29:00 PM
I agree!!

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