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Too Hot For Comfort

Snowman on a hill
Dark skies give way to the sun,
Slushy, mushy, gone!

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Vince Suzadail Jr.

January 15, 2012 at 9:13 AM

I think I told you this before, but I built a little snowman when I was a kid. I took him home for a sleep over and he peed the bed and ran away before I got up.

Sara Kendrick

November 28, 2009 at 4:31 PM

LOL. I can see the scene. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara

Audrey Haick

November 14, 2009 at 5:51 PM

This is a delightful denryu, Milton! Like a kid, I am waiting for the first snow! Last year there was hardly enough to make a good one. Great imagery! Peace and love, Audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 12, 2009 at 12:48 PM

I am so happy that your excellent poetry was included in my day of enjoyable reading. May you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration Milton. Love, Carol

Daver Austin

November 12, 2009 at 8:36 AM

Great senryu. Thanks, Milton for the tip. Love, daver

P Sheart

November 11, 2009 at 6:50 PM

To cute! Here in Alaska here today we got snow. This reminds me of the kids in area who couldn't wait for the snow to build their first snowmen. Thanks for taking my mind off of other things.Smile, Thanks to for sharing. Take care Love Light Patty