Emile Pinet Poet Rhyme

Too Good To Miss

Cupid's aim was too good to miss
obliterating glass ceilings
love freed fragile fledgling feelings.

Filling hearts with mutual bliss
two souls in love merge into one
a bond that cannot be undone.

Only love makes you feel like this
binding hopes and dreams together
inseparable forever. 

Igniting passion with a kiss
we go upon a moonlight stroll
refreshing both body and soul.

Love quickly breaches fear's abyss
gladly going that extra mile
encouraged by a simple smile.

Assuring you that hope exists
even within a hurting heart
love promises a brand-new start.

Cupid's aim is too good to miss
filling hearts with mutual bliss
only love makes you feel like this.
Igniting passion with a kiss
love quickly breaches fear's abyss
assuring you that hope exists.


(Constanza)


12/11/2015

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Line Gauthier May 15, 2018 at 8:05 PM Lovely, Emile. Emile Pinet May 16, 2018 at 8:42 AM Thank you so much Line, your comments are most appreciated my friend, Emile.

Lindsay Laurie December 22, 2015 at 5:26 PM G'day Emile... as usual your topic is informative and you have done well challenging this form of poetry Emile - well done - Lindsay Emile Pinet December 22, 2015 at 8:00 PM Thank you Lindsay, as usual your support is most welcomed. Emile.

Michael Tor December 19, 2015 at 5:35 AM Wonderful write and form. Congratulations on your win Emile!! Emile Pinet December 20, 2015 at 3:15 PM Thank you Michael, your continued support is most welcomed my friend. Emile.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 18, 2015 at 9:50 PM Wow great take with this lovely form Emile.. feeling great having learnt this unique form.. Congrats on big win! Emile Pinet December 20, 2015 at 3:16 PM Thank you very much Upma, your continued support means a lot to me. Emile.

Skat A December 18, 2015 at 9:30 PM Emile, Congratulations on your sweet win Luv **SKAT** Emile Pinet December 19, 2015 at 9:26 AM Thank you so much SKAT, I appreciate it. Emile.

Poet Destroyer A December 18, 2015 at 9:16 PM Emile, CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN.... LINDA Emile Pinet December 19, 2015 at 9:25 AM Thank you so much LINDA, I appreciate it. Emile.

Beautiful Scars December 18, 2015 at 8:50 PM Love this! Different creative and clever..Have blessed weekend! :) -luloo *smiles* Emile Pinet December 19, 2015 at 9:25 AM Thank you so much Laura, I appreciate it. Emile.

Andrea Dietrich December 18, 2015 at 4:15 PM oh how nice that you showed Connie's awesome form. It has been used all over the internet now. I know Connie told me she found it used in various websites. It was awesome to see this posted here. Congrats. Emile Pinet December 18, 2015 at 8:31 PM Thank you so much Andrea, I appreciate it. Emile.

Jan Allison December 18, 2015 at 2:15 PM Dropping back with my congrats Emile - reads and comments are like hen's teeth at the moment !!! :-) hugs Jan xx Jan Allison December 18, 2015 at 8:42 PM Oh Emile I do hope you get well soon - I come on to soup to 'escape' but there is never enough time to read comment write and keep up with the contest and health issues do take precedent over anything else :-) will have you in my thoughts for a speedy recovery:-) Hugs Jan xx Emile Pinet December 18, 2015 at 8:29 PM Thank you so much Jan, I appreciate it. I have been lax on my commenting, I've been undergoing medical treatments and have had few times that I feel well enough to comment. Emile.

Michael Tor December 11, 2015 at 9:40 PM This Constanza write is full of true expressions of love great write Emile. Emile Pinet December 12, 2015 at 9:03 AM Thank you so much Michael, I appreciate it. Emile.

Jan Allison December 11, 2015 at 3:04 PM A delightful poem Emile and a form I have never tried - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Emile Pinet December 11, 2015 at 5:23 PM Thanks Jan, I appreciate your visit. Emile.